When Winning
Eavesdropping unofficial contest
When winning
Stay far from the hidden corners
of whispery echoes.
It is here you will hear
why you are undeserving,
not enough,
a try-hard,
entitled,
lucky and
a cheat.
It is not your hard work
or perseverance they see,
the sore losers.
It is the tall poppy-head of your talent and tenacity
that must be snipped
to grow no higher than the rest.
Do not drown in the leaky whine
of sour grapes.
This burden is not yours.
Do not harden your heart
due to casual cruelty.
Your vulnerability can remain your strength.
Instead, find the corners where the whispers
are of encouragement, admiration and cooperation.
Listen for the rustling wind that blows through the long grasses
of paths unforged.
Stretch your fingers forward to find the glass panels
left by those who cannot compete but can only deter.
If you do, you will travel so far
that the small-minded murmurs
will no longer be
within earshot.
About the Creator
Penny Fuller
(Not my real name)- Other Labels include:
Lover of fiction writing and reading. Aspiring global nomad. Woman in science. Most at home in nature. Working my way to an unconventional life, story by story and poem by poem.
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Comments (7)
Amen, Penny.
This is wonderful. I love it. I have subscribed to you. I look forward to reading more of your works. If you are on Facebook please come join us on Vocal + Assist.
Good take on this challenge! Love the conclusion ✅
Such a powerful composition. Felt like needed this. Awesome!
Excellent poem with a great message! Loved the reference to different corners and the encouragement to listen to the voices of those who uplift you because they’re in your corner.
Yessss!!!! 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 Oh my goodness, this is so beautifully done and such an important message. I adored, "Do not drown in the leaky whine / of sour grapes." Brilliant. Thank you so much for submitting this to the unofficial challenge/Sleepy Mission!! 💗💗💗
Whew I loved this so much!