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WHEN I CLOSE MY EYES

... do I see you? ...

By Margaret BrennanPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
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WHEN I CLOSE MY EYES

. . . do I see you? . . .

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When I close my eyes,

Do I see you?

Are you there in my mind?

My heart?

When I close my eyes,

Do I think of you?

Wish you were here?

Reach out for your hand?

When I close my eyes,

Do I feel your embrace?

Wish for the love we made?

Long for your company?

When I close my eyes,

I see ….

RELIEF!! PEACE!!

I SEE ME!

AND ONCE AGAIN, THANK GOD, YOU’RE GONE!

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About the Creator

Margaret Brennan

I am a 77-year old grandmother who loves to write, fish, and grab my camera to capture the beautiful scenery I see around me.

My husband and I found our paradise in Punta Gorda Florida where the weather always keeps us guessing.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 months ago

    Hahahhahahahhahahaha that ending was hilarious!

  • Andrea Corwin 2 months ago

    What an ending, Margaret! 😍

  • Mariann Carroll2 months ago

    Lol, did not see that ending coming 🙂

  • Ina Zeneli2 months ago

    Loved it!

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