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When did you last see the bright sky...

Paul's Unofficial Remix Challenge

By Anna Published 3 years ago • 1 min read
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When did you last see the bright sky?

When did you last feel it's all a lie?

These are the burdens I'd die for

What is the sunset

If the gray clouds destroy

What you try to enjoy?

When did you last love until you died?

When did you last die to safe your loved?

These are eternal moments

Worth focusing

Remembering, celebrating

All of the wins and fails in the past

When did you last doubt your own presence?

When did you last look in the mirror

And question what you lived for?

As I grow older, I see my people aging

Too young to be tired

Too old to be child

Although I should not...

Written for Paul's Unofficial Remix Challenge.

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