When did you last see the bright sky?
When did you last feel it's all a lie?
These are the burdens I'd die for
What is the sunset
If the gray clouds destroy
What you try to enjoy?
When did you last love until you died?
When did you last die to safe your loved?
These are eternal moments
Worth focusing
Remembering, celebrating
All of the wins and fails in the past
When did you last doubt your own presence?
When did you last look in the mirror
And question what you lived for?
As I grow older, I see my people aging
Too young to be tired
Too old to be child
Although I should not...
Written for Paul's Unofficial Remix Challenge.
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CHAPTER 15 I pulled up in front of Sandy’s a little early, so I texted Becca again and left a message for Sharon, hoping she had a good day and I’d see her tomorrow. Two cars pulled into Sandy’s driveway. I don’t know why I was surprised to see another man with her. We’d been apart for two years and I certainly didn’t waste any time getting back on the horse.
By Tina D'Angelo7 days ago in Chapters
Comments (8)
great job
I am sure that I will never be too old to be a child.
I really need to read more of your wonderful writing! Please keep sharing your talents!
The questions brought up in this poem truly make an impact as you read. This is a wonderful poem, Anna!
Your words are wonderful ♡
Great remix poem for Paul’s challenge… ‘ As I grow older, I see my people aging Too young to be tired Too old to be child.’.. well said.
I agree with Paul, Anna, this is a wonderful poem, filled with power and feeling. I have enjoyed watching you mature as a poet and a writer the last few months. Really fine work!
Oh this is fab, Anna! Love the direction you went with this and the questions it raised. So many great lines. Well done and thank you for taking part in the craziness!