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What Will Become of Us?

Earth and Air Haiku. Evolution of life.

By PK ColleranPublished 13 days ago 1 min read
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What Will Become of Us?
Photo by Joshua J. Cotten on Unsplash

Who knows our future?

Did dinosaurs ever dream

of pink feathered flight?

nature poetry
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About the Creator

PK Colleran

Longtime teacher, now trying my hand at writing. Poetry, essays and even experimenting with fiction.

Enjoyed working with a friend as editor of his bilingual poetry, published in 2022 by Cafh Foundation: Landscape of the Soul on Amazon.

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  • HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)2 days ago

    🙏✌️💯❤️❗❗

  • Novel Allen3 days ago

    Beautiful. Love the choice of color.

  • Chua Yuan Heng4 days ago

    Simple and interesting. I think we humans will just continue evolving.

  • Ted Hauser4 days ago

    nice.

  • Carminum4 days ago

    Wonderful haiku. I am reminded of the sudden leap across time in the beginning of Kubrick's '2001'.

  • Intriguing! Excellent piece of work!

  • VIDHYASAGAR5 days ago

    Excellent ☺️🔥🤩

  • Luv this, unique! Happy to subscribe to your work.

  • Ash Taylor6 days ago

    love the story in this!

  • Julie Shetler6 days ago

    Love it

  • Olive C Fadda6 days ago

    What an amazing set of questions. Truly thought provoking and beautiful.

  • Cathy holmes6 days ago

    Oh my. Love this one. Congrats on the top story.

  • A scary thought. I don’t know why this makes me feel dread. Well done here! Hearted

  • Heather Hubler7 days ago

    Congratulations on Top Story! I really did love this one :)

  • Pryor Da costa7 days ago

    Great story!! I post similar stuff and fiction stories like this one, you should check it out!! Have a good day!

  • Very Prophetic. Enjoyed.

  • sleepy drafts7 days ago

    Oh, wow! This is amazing. Incredibly thought-provoking. What an absolutely stellar haiku. I will be thinking about this one for a while. Thank you for writing and sharing this!

  • Gina B.7 days ago

    Incredibly thought-provoking.

  • Earth and air haiku. You captured it all with the last line linking dinosaurs to a beautiful pink spoonbill. Who in itself, looks like a direct link to the dinosaurs. I just saw a little boy on my walk that said he was 4, and told me all about his dinosaur rain coat.Evolution of life… what will it become. “Us?” Well done. Very provocative.

  • Heather Hubler13 days ago

    There was so much to these three lines! Every one had me switching my train of thought. Really well done, great work :)

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