What Will Become of Us?
Earth and Air Haiku. Evolution of life.
Who knows our future?
Did dinosaurs ever dream
of pink feathered flight?
About the Creator
PK Colleran
I love words and their power to enrich our lives.
Editor of bilingual poetry collection Landscape of the Soul by Hipólito Sánchez, published by Cafh Foundation.
Translator of Living Consciously and Words Matter, by Jorge Waxemberg.
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Beautiful Haiku!! Congratulations on the top story🎉🎉🎉
OH wow! I love this haiku! Beautiful and playfully thought provoking!
Beautiful!
only god knows our future! Great piece Colleran
I love how thought provoking this is!! Well done. :)
I love all of your writings. Especially this one. And the haiku on blue jeans. 22 contributions so far. What an accomplishment. Congratulations and please keep on writing. I love your images and your poetry. Landscapes of a Soul is an amazing collection of published poetry.
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Beautiful. Love the choice of color.
Simple and interesting. I think we humans will just continue evolving.
nice.
Wonderful haiku. I am reminded of the sudden leap across time in the beginning of Kubrick's '2001'.
Intriguing! Excellent piece of work!
Excellent ☺️🔥🤩
Luv this, unique! Happy to subscribe to your work.
love the story in this!
Love it
What an amazing set of questions. Truly thought provoking and beautiful.
Oh my. Love this one. Congrats on the top story.
A scary thought. I don’t know why this makes me feel dread. Well done here! Hearted
Congratulations on Top Story! I really did love this one :)
Oh, wow! This is amazing. Incredibly thought-provoking. What an absolutely stellar haiku. I will be thinking about this one for a while. Thank you for writing and sharing this!
Incredibly thought-provoking.
Earth and air haiku. You captured it all with the last line linking dinosaurs to a beautiful pink spoonbill. Who in itself, looks like a direct link to the dinosaurs. I just saw a little boy on my walk that said he was 4, and told me all about his dinosaur rain coat.Evolution of life… what will it become. “Us?” Well done. Very provocative.
There was so much to these three lines! Every one had me switching my train of thought. Really well done, great work :)