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What was that rhyme again?

Be careful of what you pick up. #MotherCombs'LimerickChallenge

By Thavien YliasterPublished 9 months ago 1 min read
What was that rhyme again?
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Jack saw a snake with colorful bands

He picked it up with his bare hands

Then it bit his finger

And he felt something lingered

Till he collapsed and could no longer stand

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Thavien's Token: "This limerick has been constructed for Mother Combs' Limerick Challenge."

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Thank You for stopping by. Please, make yourself comfortable. I'm a novice poet, fiction writer, and dream journalist.

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Comments (5)

  • Cathy holmes9 months ago

    Haha. Jack's a dumbass.

  • Hahahahahhahahahahaha! I suppose he didn't know that not all that glitters is gold 🤣🤣🤣

  • Babs Iverson9 months ago

    Fantastic Limerick!!! Impressively written!!!know I didn't like snakes!!! Left a heart!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Mother Combs9 months ago

    Great limerick

  • I know why he couldn't stand -😂👀👌🐍

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