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Whale hunters target the baby first.
They shoot it with a harpoon
and watch it through the
sight.
They wait –
for the
ocean to stain red.
Before taking aim again.
But the mother never leaves.
She stays a foot or so away, knowing that she too,
will die at the tip of the hunter’s dart.
And the sound of her own melancholic song –
is the last that either will hear.
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