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Were I a Bird

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By Moe RadosevichPublished 5 months ago Updated 5 months ago 1 min read
Were I a Bird
Photo by Patrice Bouchard on Unsplash

dear creators,

were I a bird, oh,

how free I would be,

to fly so high,

into the sky,

to soar with the breeze,

to roost in the trees;

I haven’t a care,

while up in the air,

yet I can hop around,

down on the ground,

pecking and picking what can be found,

when the day is done,

with the setting sun,

I fly to my nest,

where my wings I can rest,

yes, were I a bird,

it’s what I’d be,


stop by,

say Hi,

next time,

you’re around my tree.

Sincerely, mr feathers

something I wrote long ago, thought it might work for the challenge with some tweeting, no pun intended 😂

Thank you for reading!

nature poetry

About the Creator

Moe Radosevich

I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you

Write on my friends

Sure would appreciate more reads and maybe some tips or pledges thank you

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  • Cendrine Marrouat5 months ago

    This is a wonderful poem, Moe! The rhythm and flow, the words, everything works perfectly here.

  • Oh how wonderful it must be to be a bird. This was wonderful!

  • Babs Iverson5 months ago


  • C. H. Richard5 months ago

    Just a beautiful visual this poem creates. ♥️

  • Gina C.5 months ago

    This painted such a lovely image in my mind, and this was so fun to read! Great job!

  • Leslie Writes5 months ago

    This is cute as heck - I mean peck!

  • Cathy holmes5 months ago

    That was a fun poem. Well done.

  • Loved this so light and humorous

  • Dana Crandell5 months ago

    Great job, buddy! I think I'm more of a woofer than a tweeter. lol

  • So tweet, uh, I mean - sweet

  • Grz Colm5 months ago

    You killed me @ mr feathers!😂 Much-ly enjoyable - thanks for sharing!

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