Were I a Bird
Say Hi
dear creators,
were I a bird, oh,
how free I would be,
to fly so high,
into the sky,
to soar with the breeze,
to roost in the trees;
I haven’t a care,
while up in the air,
yet I can hop around,
down on the ground,
pecking and picking what can be found,
when the day is done,
with the setting sun,
I fly to my nest,
where my wings I can rest,
yes, were I a bird,
it’s what I’d be,
so,
stop by,
say Hi,
next time,
you’re around my tree.
Sincerely, mr feathers
something I wrote long ago, thought it might work for the challenge with some tweeting, no pun intended 😂
Thank you for reading!
About the Creator
Moe Radosevich
I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you
Write on my friends
Sure would appreciate more reads and maybe some tips or pledges thank you
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Comments (11)
This is a wonderful poem, Moe! The rhythm and flow, the words, everything works perfectly here.
Oh how wonderful it must be to be a bird. This was wonderful!
Splendid!!!💖💖💕
Just a beautiful visual this poem creates. ♥️
This painted such a lovely image in my mind, and this was so fun to read! Great job!
This is cute as heck - I mean peck!
That was a fun poem. Well done.
Loved this so light and humorous
Great job, buddy! I think I'm more of a woofer than a tweeter. lol
So tweet, uh, I mean - sweet
You killed me @ mr feathers!😂 Much-ly enjoyable - thanks for sharing!