Water breaks before
Pain, like fire, burns before
Your first breath of air.
About the Creator
Rayn B
I have been writing poetry and lyrics since I was a child. I have recently started writing short scripts for “found footage” horror TikToks. I dream of writing books and full length screenplays. Thanks for being in this community with me!
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Outstanding
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
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Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
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The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
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Stalking the Wild Tautogram
Vocal has outdone themselves with the latest wild Challenge! I had to hit the books (OK- I looked into the eye of the Google-machine) to understand the nature of this newest beast that is consuming the brains of those around me because I had never heard of this thing before.
By Judey Kalchik3 days ago in FYI
Comments (6)
Wow! This says so much and covers everything.
Whoaaa! This was so deep and beautifully written! Loved it! I've hearted and subscribed! 💖
Wonderful use of the four elements in such few words!
Love this creative take on the challenge.
love it!
Really brilliant. Love the creative use of all the elements ;)