Water breaks before
Pain, like fire, burns before
Your first breath of air.
About the Creator
I have been writing poetry and lyrics since I was a child. I have recently started writing short scripts for “found footage” horror TikToks. I dream of writing books and full length screenplays. Thanks for being in this community with me!
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Wonderful use of the four elements in such few words!
Love this creative take on the challenge.
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