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Welcome to Earth

A haiku

By Rayn BPublished 2 months ago 1 min read

Water breaks before

Pain, like fire, burns before

Your first breath of air.

nature poetry

About the Creator

Rayn B

I have been writing poetry and lyrics since I was a child. I have recently started writing short scripts for “found footage” horror TikToks. I dream of writing books and full length screenplays. Thanks for being in this community with me!

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  • Cathy holmes2 months ago

    Wow! This says so much and covers everything.

  • Whoaaa! This was so deep and beautifully written! Loved it! I've hearted and subscribed! 💖

  • Gina B.2 months ago

    Love this creative take on the challenge.

  • Ash Taylor2 months ago

    love it!

  • Tim2 months ago

    Really brilliant. Love the creative use of all the elements ;)

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