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WE MADE LOVE NAKED IN THE RAIN

It was perfect you where perfect my darling

By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk Published 27 days ago • 1 min read
By Marie381Uk

WE MADE LOVE NAKED IN THE RAIN

We made love naked in the rain,
beneath a trembling sky,
the thunder rolled above our heads
as clouds went drifting by.

Our clothes lay soaking on the grass,
our shoes beside the gate,
two foolish hearts without a plan,
believing love was fate.

The raindrops kissed our burning skin,
the cold could not get through,
for all the world had disappeared—
there was only me and you.

No walls around, no ceiling high,
no clock to call our names,
just water pouring from the dark
and two hearts wrapped in flames.

We laughed until we could not breathe,
we danced on muddy ground,
and even though the storm was wild,
we never heard a sound.

We made love naked in the rain,
with heaven looking down,
the moon wore clouds across her face,
the stars refused to frown.

The years have taken many things,
and time has brought its pain,
but nothing ever washed away
that night we loved beneath the rain.

Now every storm brings you to me,
however far you’ve gone,
I close my eyes and feel your touch
until the rain moves on.

We made love naked in the rain,
young, breathless, unashamed,
and though the world forgot that night,
my heart remained the same.

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♿ V+ Marie381Uk

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    Written by ♿ V+ Marie381Uk