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James & Oneg's Summer Writing Challenge Extravaganza - #5: You’ve Got Mail

By Sheila L. ChingwaPublished 9 months ago 1 min read
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Long Winded Warning

Days have gone

I no longer listen

to a boss's long

plethoric renditions of rules.

******

I am happy

you miss my skills

but they are

No longer for you to use.

******

You're email

received today,

should no longer

be received by me.

******

I smile

as I read the acid

in your tone

as I feel your angered key strokes.

*******

Rules in office.

Rules in the building.

Rules, Rules, Rules

Is why I left.

*******

Oh My Goodness.

I hope

the one who

replaced me is a good person.

******

I smile

for I know

How to support

Those left behind.

******

I slyly text

an old cronies

asking, "Are you okay?"

as I read the email.

*****

According to him,

everything is falling

apart and concaving in.

are you Okay?

******

A ding after a delay.

Long winded note.

Fingernails dug into the keys on the phone.

I find, you are not okay.

******

I plea for a lunch.

Quickly she agrees.

Actually, she begged

for time with me.

******

Her last text

came with a warning

"precede with caution"

came her reply to me.

Last line of the email: "Warning...this last one will be a long email too."

I wrote this poem in response to James & Oneg's Summer Writing Challenge Extravaganza. I was tagged to participate in the fifth challenge of the series.

Theme: "You’ve Got Mail! Challenge: start a story/poem with the last line of an email or letter you recently received."

The line that starts my poem comes from a friend's email I received a little while ago.

Check out all the prompts and rules below.

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About the Creator

Sheila L. Chingwa

Welcome to my world.

Welcome to my thoughts.

I am proud to be a Native American Elder born and raised in Northern Michigan. Thanks to my hard work I have a B.A. in Education and a Masters in Administration and Supervision in Education.

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  • Jazzy 9 months ago

    Super relatable! Wow well done!

  • Gosh this poem was so relatable! Awesome job!

  • Oneg In The Arctic9 months ago

    Oh I love this. Gosh how true and exhausting and sometimes you just want to email people back with “go f yourself! I’m not your puppet!” Anyways haha 🤪

  • This was deep Sheila. I enjoyed the read.

  • Tiffany Gordon 9 months ago

    Awesome job Sheila!

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