Warning: Proceed with Caution
James & Oneg's Summer Writing Challenge Extravaganza - #5: You’ve Got Mail
Long Winded Warning
Days have gone
I no longer listen
to a boss's long
plethoric renditions of rules.
******
I am happy
you miss my skills
but they are
No longer for you to use.
******
You're email
received today,
should no longer
be received by me.
******
I smile
as I read the acid
in your tone
as I feel your angered key strokes.
*******
Rules in office.
Rules in the building.
Rules, Rules, Rules
Is why I left.
*******
Oh My Goodness.
I hope
the one who
replaced me is a good person.
******
I smile
for I know
How to support
Those left behind.
******
I slyly text
an old cronies
asking, "Are you okay?"
as I read the email.
*****
According to him,
everything is falling
apart and concaving in.
are you Okay?
******
A ding after a delay.
Long winded note.
Fingernails dug into the keys on the phone.
I find, you are not okay.
******
I plea for a lunch.
Quickly she agrees.
Actually, she begged
for time with me.
******
Her last text
came with a warning
"precede with caution"
came her reply to me.
Last line of the email: "Warning...this last one will be a long email too."
I wrote this poem in response to James & Oneg's Summer Writing Challenge Extravaganza. I was tagged to participate in the fifth challenge of the series.
Theme: "You’ve Got Mail! Challenge: start a story/poem with the last line of an email or letter you recently received."
The line that starts my poem comes from a friend's email I received a little while ago.
Check out all the prompts and rules below.
About the Creator
Sheila L. Chingwa
Welcome to my world.
Welcome to my thoughts.
I am proud to be a Native American Elder born and raised in Northern Michigan. Thanks to my hard work I have a B.A. in Education and a Masters in Administration and Supervision in Education.
Reader insights
Outstanding
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Top insights
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Comments (5)
Super relatable! Wow well done!
Gosh this poem was so relatable! Awesome job!
Oh I love this. Gosh how true and exhausting and sometimes you just want to email people back with “go f yourself! I’m not your puppet!” Anyways haha 🤪
This was deep Sheila. I enjoyed the read.
Awesome job Sheila!