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Wall of Death

A Tenth Piece of Dark Poetry.

By Mike Singleton - MikeydredPublished 2 years ago β€’ 1 min read
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This is my tenth dark poem for Dharrsheena.

The music is "Wall of Death" a cover of the Richard Thompson song about the circus attraction, not quite the same as my wall of death, but the title is the same and it is a wonderful song.

πŸ–€πŸ’€πŸ–€πŸ’€πŸ–€πŸ’€πŸ–€πŸ’€πŸ–€πŸ’€πŸ–€πŸ’€

Unable to move, not in control

The first brick is placed. To start the wall

Mortar is added, keeps it in place

Abusive captor laughs in your face

πŸ–€πŸ’€

The wall is growing, your fate is sealed

Breathing is hard, and now You can’t see

Brick upon brick, now buried alive

He took your tongue, you can’t even cry

πŸ–€πŸ’€

Your final moments, bricks in your face

To starve or suffocate in this space

This, your end for no reason at all

Victim of cruelty, here you fall

πŸ–€πŸ’€

Your life is taken, and no one knew

The body behind the wall is YOU

πŸ–€πŸ’€πŸ–€πŸ’€πŸ–€πŸ’€πŸ–€πŸ’€πŸ–€πŸ’€πŸ–€πŸ’€

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Mike Singleton - Mikeydred

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  • Colleen Millsteed 2 years ago

    Wow you’ve picked up this theme and run with it and you’ve done it really well my friend.

  • Absolutely loved the concept of being buried alive behind a wall! That's brilliant! Thank you so much for this poem! I loved it so much!

  • Dawn Salois2 years ago

    Very well done Mike! This made me think of β€œThe Cask of Amontillado.” Wonderful descriptions.

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