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By Moe RadosevichPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
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deep within the earth,

fires rage, water boils, the rocks melt;

eruptions, lava flows!!

nature poetry

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Moe Radosevich

I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you

Write on my friends

Sure would appreciate more reads and maybe some tips or pledges thank you

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  • Gina C.2 months ago

    You definitely captured the bright and violent turbulence of fire! Well done! :)

  • Cathy holmes2 months ago

    nicely done.

  • Babs Iverson2 months ago

    Wonderful haiku!!! Your elements poem, Volcano, had a nice even flow to it!!! Loved it!!!💕💖😊

  • Lea Springer2 months ago

    Very dramatic and most of the action takes place unseen, just like in your Haiku...and then the eruption! I'm just reading "Fires" a novel set in volcanic Iceland about how difficult it is to pre-determine the exact location of an expected eruption.

  • Daniel Jeyaraman2 months ago

    Brilliantly written, Moe. Best of luck to you! <3

  • Heather Hubler2 months ago

    Well done! I have always been fascinated with lava. The second line really had the pressure building so that your third line hit home. I enjoyed the read :)

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