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deep within the earth,
fires rage, water boils, the rocks melt;
eruptions, lava flows!!
About the Creator
I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you
Write on my friends
Sure would appreciate more reads and maybe some tips or pledges thank you
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
You definitely captured the bright and violent turbulence of fire! Well done! :)
Wonderful haiku!!! Your elements poem, Volcano, had a nice even flow to it!!! Loved it!!!💕💖😊
Very dramatic and most of the action takes place unseen, just like in your Haiku...and then the eruption! I'm just reading "Fires" a novel set in volcanic Iceland about how difficult it is to pre-determine the exact location of an expected eruption.
Brilliantly written, Moe. Best of luck to you! <3
Well done! I have always been fascinated with lava. The second line really had the pressure building so that your third line hit home. I enjoyed the read :)