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Villanelle for a Visitor

To see nothing and everything

By Vanessa GonzalesPublished 3 years ago • Updated 3 years ago • 1 min read
Top Story - September 2023
Villanelle for a Visitor
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For those adrift upon this lonely sphere

The magic’s sometimes passing hard to find

I wonder what we’re even doing here

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But you’re brand new and everything’s still clear

Without the crushing weight of time and mind

For those adrift upon this lonely sphere

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What can I show you? What won’t disappear?

To be ephemeral would be unkind

I wonder what we’re even doing here

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Cities built on cities topple down, I fear

Books and art and song will slip behind

For those adrift upon this lonely sphere

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All faiths and gods, forbidding and severe

Will spin away like others of their kind

I wonder what we’re even doing here

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I’ll show it all, the lovely and austere

Before the captive moment can unwind

And let you judge what you are doing here

With those adrift upon this lonely sphere

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Note: A villanelle is a structured form of poetry with five three-line stanzas and one quatrain. The first and third lines of the first stanza repeat in the remaining stanzas.

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Vanessa Gonzales

"Writing is the painting of the voice." - Voltaire

When I'm not writing, I take photos. You can see them here.

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    Written by Vanessa Gonzales