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you - helpless, drowning
me - screaming, let me save you
you - doomed to be blue
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Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Masterful proofreading
Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
Comments (4)
Expressed so clearly and powerfully! Well done!
Sometimes, we can't save people who don't wanna be saved.
Blue, blue, it's blue they say when the heart's just out of reach.
Oh wow! This hits home so hard. Tragic but beautifully written. Loved it!