Come! Meet me at our tree,
I need to feel the bark on my back
As you push me with a kiss, deep,
Limb next to limb,
Body, melt body
Soon, we are one.
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Ruth Stewart
I'm a grandmother of four amazing grandchildren and a mum of three fabulous children. I write poetry mainly, also prose and the odd story. I live in Scotland, UK. For a secret link to watch me read my favourite poems click right here!
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Paint and Weave
Author's Notes: I rediscovered my 1980's poetry magnets box and in it were two poems I find compelling. I recall having challenged myself to create two poems using the same set of words. These two poem are what spilled out. Which one resonates more with you, version A or B? Leave it in Comments. I'd love to know your thoughts!
By Christy Munson5 days ago in Poets
Comments (7)
Yo! Just saw the link but I’ve read again! 😊👍
Lovely poem about love and heartfelt memories against the tree with old flames. Wow
lovely at passionate at once. Well done.
One I had missed beautiful words.
Love it. This is hot and sweet at the same time.
Limb next to limb. That was brilliant! Awesome poem!
Suggestive...but not overblown...this has the right level of heat and leaves a lot to the imagination! Love it!