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Upwards and Onwards

A mountainous verse

By TheSpinstressPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Upwards and Onwards
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My mother, she strolls

And she puffs and she stumbles;

Climbs, and she forgets.

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TheSpinstress

I teach English, watch Bollywood, learn Hindi, herd cats, and don't buy new clothes. Follow me on the Spinstress for sarcasm and snacks; MovieJaadoo for Hindi film. :)

http://thespinstressblog.wordpress.com/

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran9 months ago

    This made me think of Alzheimers and Dementia. It's just so sad!

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