Unstable Equilibria
Bad Thoughts, Bad Habits
Life is always fun until it’s not
Either Vodka or Bullet, I must take a shot
Escape my mental toils
Or shed my mortal coils
I dance with this decision quite a lot
About the Creator
96-Zest Doe
My name is 96-Zest Doe, born January 1st, 1871. I have returned from a posthumous existence to finish an important collection of stories, documents, and proofs. The best has yet to come.
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Comments (9)
oh my. this one says a lot. Very well done.
Wow, this is powerful, thought-provoking, and very well done!
Raw, powerful, courageous!!! Left some love!!!💖💖💕
This is so powerful and well written. Please keep fighting those thoughts. I am rooting for you!
I hear you. Very well conveyed.
Gosh this was so emotional and deep. You did a fantastic job on this one!
We'll Said❤️💯👑😉
Deep on so many levels!
Everyone have life battle to overcome , well done on creating this poem to describe it.