What is love without hurt?
What is faith without doubt?
What's laughter without pain?
What's moving on without being stuck?
What's a kiss without yearning?
What's a hug without the warmth?
What's hope without the wait?
What's the rise without a fall?
What's being found without loosing ur way?
What's heart break without loving all the way?
What's life without death?
What's the dawn without the sun?
What's a shoe without feet?
What's a nose that can't breathe?
What's a prayer without surrender?
What's Christmas if not in December?
What's my life without you?
What's your life without me?
What's my mind without the thoughts?
Probably a body without a soul.
What's a mistake without the lesson?
What's a choice without confusion?
Was I saving you from them?
Was I saving you from me?
Was I saving me from you?
Did I overthink too much of it too?
If I rewind, would I do it all the same way?
Would I still push you away?
Here I am, overthinking again
Probably because I heard someone say your name.
What's a pen that can't write?
What's a future that can't unfold?
What's left if the wrongs can't be right?
Some stories are better left untold.
About the Creator
Harydo Neon
I drain my thoughts through my pen. That's the only way I breathe.
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Comments (15)
Great Job.
This is a wonderful list poem with deep questions, congratulations on top story!
Congrats on Top Story!🥳🥳🥳
Wow, I'm truly impressed by the thoughts you collected here!!
The narrative evoked intense feelings within me. https://vocal.media/fiction/the-starving-shadow
Great poem with deep truth to make people think.
A very well-thought-out piece with many truthful thoughts. This is excellent work!
This is so true, the bad moments in life are where you can gain your greatest lessons. Wonderful and profoundly written ❤️
You need the dark to appreciate the light otherwise how do you know what the light is? And then all those other things that compliment each other leading to harmony - or not? I liked this.
The wrongs can be retold with different parts given strength, even if they cant be made right.
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Strikingly honest and real! I relate more than I care to admit- you capture the yearnings and fears that tug at each of our hearts in different ways. Thanks for sharing, and congrats on Top Story!
Lovely and deep. A very thought-provoking poem! Congrats on top story!
What are my finger tips that do not comment on this poem!!! Well done.