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Unraveling Pride: A Journey to Love's Embrace

Breaking down barriers to find the vulnerability within

By Lawrence Mireku AduPublished 12 months ago 2 min read
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In the realm of love, where hearts intertwine,

There exists a tale of a lover so divine.

A story of passion, yet weighed down by pride,

Where two souls collided, unable to coincide.

My lover, with a spirit fierce and strong,

Carried pride within, a shield all along.

Confident and bold, never willing to yield,

A persona so captivating, but a heart concealed.

In their eyes, a fire burned bright and high,

A flame of determination, reaching for the sky.

But beneath the surface, emotions untold,

A vulnerability hidden, a heart yet to unfold.

With each passing day, I sought to understand,

The depths of their pride, like shifting sand.

For pride can be a fortress, a barrier to connection,

A shield that protects, but also creates rejection.

I witnessed their triumphs, their accomplishments grand,

But also the moments when pride took command.

They stood tall and unyielding, never backing down,

Yet sometimes I longed for their pride to soften, to drown.

In love's embrace, I yearned to see them vulnerable,

To witness their heart, raw and beautiful.

But pride stood guard, an ever-present force,

Keeping love at bay, veiling their true source.

I pondered the reasons behind their pride's hold,

Was it fear of being hurt, or secrets untold?

Or was it simply a part of who they were,

A core element, making them feel secure?

I vowed to unravel the layers of their pride,

To break down the walls they had carefully tied.

With patience and tenderness, I offered my love,

Hoping to reach their heart, soaring above.

Through whispered words and gentle touch,

I aimed to soften their pride, little by little, as such.

I showered them with affection, unwavering and true,

Hoping my love would penetrate, their pride undo.

But pride, oh pride, a formidable foe,

Its roots dug deep, unwilling to let go.

As I gazed into their eyes, I saw the struggle within,

A battle between pride and love, longing to begin.

For pride can be a virtue, a source of strength and might,

But when it hinders love's growth, it dims the light.

I yearned for my lover to embrace vulnerability's grace,

To let go of pride's shackles, and meet me face to face.

And in that moment, a shift began to occur,

As love's tendrils weaved, their pride did blur.

With every tender gesture, every heartfelt word,

Their pride slowly diminished, like a songbird.

They began to open up, like a blooming flower,

Revealing their essence, their vulnerability's power.

And in that vulnerability, I found a love so deep,

A connection forged, forever to keep.

My lover's pride, once a towering wall,

Now crumbled and fell, like leaves in the fall.

In its place, a love so pure and true,

A love unburdened by pride, a love that grew.

So, dear reader, take heed of this tale,

Of a lover's journey through pride's veil.

For love can conquer all, with patience and care,

And pride, when softened, can lead to love's affair

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Lawrence Mireku Adu

Welcome to my page! I’m here to share my passion for writing with you. Whether you’re looking for inspiration, tips, or just some fun stories, you’ll find it all here. I hope you enjoy reading my work as much as I enjoy creating it.

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  • HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)12 months ago

    Great piece ✨💖📝😉

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