just want you to know,
I’ll be with you,
when it’s my time too;
you went away!
but hear what I say,
once more we’ll be us,
on my last day!!
about as short n sweet as I can be, thanks for reading
About the Creator
Moe Radosevich
I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you
Write on my friends
Sure would appreciate more reads and maybe some tips or pledges thank you
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Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Compelling and original writing
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Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
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Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Eye opening
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The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Comments (4)
Heartbreaking yet so beautifully written! I loved it so much!
Brilliant & beautiful!!! Loved it!!!
Sad yet beautiful. Well done, Moe.
Well done, Moe! You're gonna be a contender in this challenge!