Under The Golden Tree of Stars (A Rabbit Watches)

Introduction

This is my first attempt at a Slijo Poem which was shown to me by Natalie Wilkinson in this story:

The first line is usually written in a 3-4-4-4 grouping pattern and states the theme of the poem, where a situation is generally introduced.

The second line is usually written in a 3-4-4-4 pattern (similar to the first) and is an elaboration of the first line's theme or situation (development).

The third line is divided into two sections. The first section, the counter-theme, is grouped as 3-5, while the second part, considered the conclusion of the poem, is written as 4-3. The counter-theme is called the 'twist,' which is usually a surprise in meaning, sound, or other device.

This poem is inspired by the beautiful painting by Angie Livingstone showing a rabbit under a Golden Tree of Stars.

The music is "Under Stars" by Brian Eno from the album "Apollo"

Under The Golden Tree of Stars (A Rabbit Watches)

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Sat Under The Golden Tree Of Of Shining Stars Is A Rabbit

The Rabbit, It Is Entranced By The Beauty Of What It Sees

All Good Things Give Us Memories

Now Is The Time To Go Home

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