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Twenty-year night

for my husband

By Raine FielderPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
Twenty-year night
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It’s been a long hard twenty-year night

Chasing shooting stars, waiting for sunrise

My eyes adjusted to the dark and so I couldn’t see

That I was missing the dawn while looking for me

Your name is written in chalk on my grandmother's attic

Somehow you've left a permanent stain

And isn't it strange

that I was right the first time

when I thought I found the one

if old flames were a candle then you are the dawn

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Raine Fielder

Raine has been writing poetry since she was in seventh grade. She has written several poems, song lyrics, short stories and eight books. Writing is her main purpose.

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    Written by Raine Fielder