i hummed a tune quietly to myself
a lilting jilting tilting tune i’d never heard
i turned it over and around inside my head
thinking how i could adapt it with a word (or two)
the words came quickly to me this day
like a poorly wrapped fever in a torrent
so mesmerisingly desperate
needy ready repulsive and abhorrent
but when i picked up my guitar
the answers weren’t there
i was so sure this time
it felt so right in here inside my head
instead i found something simple and different
something that don’t give a solitary fuck at all
my amp tubes didn’t crackles or pop
baby wah bliss the sound the noise the wall
i played until my fingers hurt and a bit
until my Mrs. told me turn it down
i immediately quickly, hastily complied
she’s one lady i don’t fuck around
so this really then this could be her tune
could be mine could be ours could be hers
you picked a funny time to leave me loose wheel
watch as this gets bad then goes to worse
watch it disintegrate in into a thousand fiery pieces
each piece a separate hell; to be hated, to be loved
each piece slow cartwheeling to its own conclusion
it is what it is and all it is no help no hands no above
i hum my tunes to myself, just myself
that’s where they stay where they’re mine
no one else needs to hear my noise
they just need to know i’m fine
About the Creator
Brenton F
It's just a token of my extreme - Frank Zappa
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Wonderfully written piece by a brilliant writer ✍️🫵🏾💯🫶🏾‼️
As long as we don't dance to anyone's tune, I guess that's okay. Loved your poem!