Trusting The Senses
Built In Security
A stale smell floats through the air
cherry red - lights up the dark
Nobody said that life was fair
and here's the hardest part
You feel every last betrayal, in all parts of your being
everything you hear or smell, taste everything you're feeling
You never need to use your eyes to see what's happening
discards you for a new fix- like that cigarette he's dragging
The ashy smell burns in your mind, as the vapors leave a trace
what he's left behind has left a trail running down there, on your face
The cigarettes he burned through, wore a danger on its label
he needs one that reads, "beware" - he'll break you too, if he is able
Your heart gapes like a cut, with no blood to leave it's mark
he hurt you deep inside, with a bite worse than his bark
Once you shake off that mistake, and get your armor put back on
he'll be the one regretting when he sees that you are really gone
Learn to listen to your body, it has your best at heart
the senses will protect you - cause you're a priceless work of art
So, when that devil comes a calling, let your senses be your guide
they will warn you of the risks and keep your threats identified
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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition
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This was so relatable and I was able to resonate with every single feeling and senses here!
Awesome💕💖💖😊
Excellent!
I love the line, "Learn to listen to your body, it has your best at heart." That is so very true. Excellent job as always Kelli!!!
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Great challenge entry!
A great sensory shot at the challenge
Really powerful stuff and excellent use with all the senses!