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Transactional

A toxic relationship.

By Silver Serpent BooksPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - February 2024
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Transactional
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Hello, excuse me...

The crackling voice on the phone held the same

Bitter, affluent tone that always preceded the

Transaction.

A tip of the hand already.

.

Are you well?

No, never.

Nothing even close to well, to all right, to acceptable.

I am the withering plant you swore to water

Two months back, choking on dry dirt and sunlight.

.

I hope you are.

It has the same rubbery feel as his lies.

Tastes the same, chalky and untrue, in my mouth

As I repeat it back to an empty house.

A stadium with no audience.

.

Listen...

It isn't a plea, not really, but a command.

The words wrap themselves around my throat

And demand that I hear past the letters

To the threat of violence looming large.

.

I need...

Money? Booze? Never something so simple.

What he wants is never something easy to obtain.

It's the old transaction of the heart.

He rambles out abusive words, I listen, and the world grows still.

.

I love you.

A rubber band snapping back to its form.

The lie is as ugly as the rest and as familiar too.

I mimic the response, spit out a few sympathetic apologies,

And the transaction is complete.

.

The call ends. The email signs off. The text remains unanswered.

I have fulfilled my end of the bargain.

He has given me a basket full of pain and I have fed him

His transactional sympathy.

performance poetryMental Healthlove poemsFree Verse
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Silver Serpent Books

Writer. Interested in all the rocks people have forgotten to turn over. There are whole worlds under there, you know. Dark ones too, even better.

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  • Bonnie Bowerman2 months ago

    So powerful - in how it rings true to life sometimes! Brillant!

  • Kristen Balyeat2 months ago

    Oh my. I just sat in silence for a few minutes after reading this. I felt every word in every fiber of my being. Painful. Brilliant. Profound.

  • John K2 months ago

    Totally deserving of top story!

  • Patrick H2 months ago

    That last verse and "I love you. A rubber band snapping back to its form. The lie is as ugly as the rest" - powerful stuff. Congrats on the Top Story. You were bound to nab one with the sheer weight of quality pieces you've been smashing out lately. Well deserved.

  • Tracy Kreuzburg 2 months ago

    Very representative of abusive or unfulfilled relationships, the word 'transactional'. Interestingly, it applies to non-'romantic' relationships as well. You do what is expected, while your heart cries out 'no!' This is very well done and the metaphors are perfect. Wonderful work!

  • sudip tarafder2 months ago

    Congrats! I enjoyed it!’

  • Hannah Moore2 months ago

    Ouch. This is fantastic, but ouch!

  • Alyssa Nicole2 months ago

    This is such a beautiful and relatable poem. I love the withering plant description. Congrats on the Top Story!

  • Oh wow, so incredibly descriptive and relatable. Congratulations on your top story

  • Raduxx Radu2 months ago

    Congratulations on your Top Story 💓😘💖❤👍

  • Margaret Brennan2 months ago

    congratulations on TS. This was truly excellent.

  • Dorota2 months ago

    Congratulations on your Top Story

  • Gargie S Anand2 months ago

    "I love you. A rubber band snapping back to its form. The lie is as ugly as the rest and as familiar too." I now call this emotional blackmail. This is a very sad reality. You have done an amazing job composing this.

  • Matthew Mccahey2 months ago

    I know that feeling all too well, I stopped giving them any part of me. Can't deal with people like that

  • J2 months ago

    How do you know my dad?

  • Anna 2 months ago

    Congrats on Top Story!🥳

  • Cathy holmes2 months ago

    Beautiful written. Congrats on the TS.

  • Hayley Matto2 months ago

    Congrats on TS! This was powerful & so well written. I loved so much of this one, fav being the metaphor of being a dried out house plant.

  • Dariusz 2 months ago

    Congratulations on top story :)

  • Melissa Ingoldsby2 months ago

    That last line was very powerful and too real. Excellent piece

  • sleepy drafts2 months ago

    Congratulations on Top Story!!! 💓💓

  • sleepy drafts2 months ago

    I have to agree with Kendall, this one will be with me for a while. Hauntingly and beautifully done. 💗

  • Kendall Defoe 2 months ago

    This is going to stick with me...

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