Tour Of The New Heart Gallery Space
A new gallery in town
I’ve been working hard on a huge business proposition
This is months and months of planning and organising,
‘Open to the Public’ signs have been ordered and delivered
As has the printed ‘Entry’ tickets and merchandising.
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It’s now time to start advertising for this exciting event
And a date and time to be set for one month in advance,
The building interior has been fitted out to a certain style
An expensive undertaking but we had enough finance.
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So suddenly the final month in advance has flown past
Opening Night to tour Colleen’s heart is only hours away,
Final finishing touches to the Gallery Space are in process
Once open there will numerous chambers on display.
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A total sell out for Opening Night with every ticket sold
The time is almost on us and there’s a queue outside,
A Final run through of the Gallery Space to ensure it is ready
At the front door we have programmes to be supplied.
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Strike of the clock at the opening hour, as the doors open
A Tour Guide starts to lead the first group down the aisle,
“Ladies and Gentlemen, you’ll experience many emotions
Beginning in this chamber of when this heart was a child.”
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The Guide led them through the first chamber of childhood
Where they felt intense terror, deep sadness and fear,
From a childhood consisting of years of agonising abuse
The Guests felt these emotions and all faces showed a tear.
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“Ladies and Gentlemen, let’s keep on through to the next
Which happens to be the Teenager Chamber of this heart,”
As they entered this chamber, they experienced high stress
Residual left from youth homelessness being a large part.
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As they moved further into this chamber, they felt true love
The pairing with her soul mate during her teenage years,
Some of the Guests were enjoying the intense feelings
Would rather stay to bask in its’ glory and offered a cheer.
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The Tour Guide left those guests behind and moved the rest
Slowly walking through an aisle until they reached the Aorta,
Through the Aorta to the rear chamber filled with happiness
Sheer joy of having two boys, while still trying for a daughter.
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We arranged comfortable seating in this chamber to enjoy
Beautiful feelings experienced while having afternoon tea,
It was glorious to see Guests soaking up all these emotions
This alone was the success we hoped that we would see.
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“Ladies and Gentlemen, we are nearing the end of today’s tour
We have the very last chamber, down this aisle and to the right,”
They didn’t want to leave the happiness and joy they all felt
But unbeknownst to all the Guests there was more to delight.
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The last chamber of Colleen’s Heart oozed calm and peace
As she had come into her own as she aged and matured,
She boosted her confidence and discarded life’s dirty trash
Learnt to say no and dealt with previous pain she’d endured.
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“Ladies and Gentlemen, feel free to linger longer in this chamber
Bath and soak in the feelings that saturate the walls in this part,
Allow the calm and peace to detox and de-stress your entire body
While thanking Colleen for allowing you to experience her heart.”
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Colleen Millsteed
My first love is poetry — it’s like a desperate need to write, to free up space in my mind, to escape the constant noise in my head. Most of the time the poems write themselves — I’m just the conduit holding the metaphorical pen.
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Wow, very original.👍👏
This was so clever! It was emotional but in a very creative way!