“As long as you are here with me, care for me.”
“Of course, I care for you.”
She grabs my hand,
Holds me tight,
My current vision, Invisible,
I feel sick,
I feel loose,
I touch her hand,
It’s a touch of grace.
Touch of safety,
Belongingness,
Touch of,
“I understand how your feeling”
Overstimulated,
Scared,
Insecure,
It’s a touch of grace
Touch of her hand,
Telling me that she won’t leave my side,
She’s by my side,
Her hand feels like
Touch of grace~
~~~~~
Authors Notes:
Thank you so much for reading my poem! 💟
Sometimes I got really bad anxiety being in a crowded area where I wasn’t fully sober, so having a friend who always has your side is important!!
About the Creator
Kodah
- Storyteller, Love/Romance, Poetry, Dark, Mental health, Psychological, Surreal, Nature, Mythical
~𝓢𝓽𝓸𝓻𝓲𝓮𝓼 𝓬𝓪𝓷 𝓫𝓮 𝓪 𝓵𝓲𝓽𝓽𝓵𝓮 𝓭𝓮𝓮𝓹~
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Compelling and original writing
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Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Original narrative & well developed characters
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Comments (11)
For sure we all need that kind of friend, both to steer each other on the right pathway. Never get drunk alone, best at home, but fun must be had. just carefully.
Trust and faith in another….beautiful I like the way you formatted this, it really adds a depth to the poem
We all need a friend like that! Loved your poem Kodah!
Awww, you have such a sweet and kind friend! Loved your poem!
Beautifully written! Well done Kodah
This is so beautiful and so sweet!! ❤️
Touch of grace it certainly is! Loved this poem.
Beautiful work Kodah!
That was really intense! Then your note. It hit me a second time! Nice piece!
Oh I felt this one! Well done.
Well written! Great work!