you know you could make
this
a
Top Story
if you gave it lots of love
give it a boost,
a bit of juice
and let it rise above
this would make a great Top Story
its got this and it’s got that
it’s got all those special things
and ten percent less fat
the whole thing
could literally sing
it's got tempo
it nearly rhymes
it’s a shining beacon
a sign of our times
this would make a brilliant Top Story
a name on everyone’s lips
give me those loves
give me those comments
then send me those endless tips
it’s got whistles
it’s got bells
it’s got demons
from different hells
its got laughter
its got tears
made on mull
made on beers
made with the rarest ingredients known to man
made with a flair a dream and a plan
organically grown in a village near you
certified, verified, tested and true
it will green your salad
it will brighten your whites
it will get you a ten percent discount
on soft LED lights
this is real serious
so i’m not being funny
i’m completely flat broke
and i need the money
About the Creator
Brenton F
It's just a token of my extreme - Frank Zappa
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Reader insights
Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
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Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Writing reflected the title & theme
I AM
This is not who I thought I would be. Before my family was captured and forced into slavery, I had aspirations of becoming a wealthy business owner or possibly a scholar and philosopher. Becoming a warrior was the furthest thing from my mind. Unfortunately, our Roman conquerors had other plans.
By Mark Gagnon3 days ago in Fiction
Comments (9)
Rooting for you.
Lol...this is funny and clever. I am sure this will be a top story soon. It deserves to be, given that it has "everything"
JUSTIN JUSTIN CAN YOU HEAR ME JUSTIN. PLEASE MAKE THIS A TOP STORY
Fun!😁 Hope you are travelling well Brenton! Need to do a catch up of your work (and many other too) shortly. Haven’t been on as much this year.
What are you getting at? hahahaha!! I hope this really does get Top Story. It was quite clever :)
Nice try!! We will see!😂😂🤣
Nice
Oh man, I think you’re on to something here
Huh. The strangest thing is happening. 🤔 There's this nagging voice inside me, pushing me to promote this so it can secure a Top Story spot. Weird. 🤣