Toilet Talk
A Best Friends, Best Friend
You’re always there for me in the “wee” hours,
as I stumble around in the dark.
Ever faithful as I have a drink, (or two),
and in need of a clean place to barf.
The epitome of my boastful ode…
shining bright in my moments of need.
My self cleaning, minty fresh commode,
the safe place, where I take a pee.
Never judging, fast swirling - power of flush,
disposing of more than my feces.
The kind that could make a proper girl blush,
the parts, less than appealing of me.
Steady and bold, you don’t waver,
there for the instant that I need your aid.
The ultimate of party favors,
regardless of choices I’ve made.
There should be songs - sung of your achievements,
of your unending love and support.
For your ability to keep all my secrets,
whose faithfulness never falls short.
******
A heartfelt ode, to my commode…
the never quitter shitter.
The porcelain that holds the force within,
the loo for my poo, the hitter.
The ever listening ear for my rear end…
the bowl for the bowel challenged, best friend.
****
My promise that you will never be clogged or the air in your presence, smell rotten
I vow that your sacrifice is not taken lightly and your duty is never forgotten
***
For all that you do, this ode is for you
About the Creator
Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
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Comments (12)
Ahhhh. Yes. We must bow down to the porcelain god. Hahaha. Great poem, truthful and very funny!! 🥰😂 Yes. A good pairing with mine to make a trilogy. What would the third part be? Hmmm. I. Commode II. TP. III?
🤣 Funny, but also heartfelt. Well done!
Ha ha - too funny Kelli! 🤣 Great job! 👍
Love it! Never been a drinker, but the flu has had me knowing every last bit of this devotion & praise.
Fantastic job! This painted a vivid picture 😅 Definitely some memorable lines in here! ❤️
Well shit. If thus ain't a winner, I'll use Vocal as a commode. Just fantastic, my friend. Dare I, laughed my ass off.
This was hilarious , great lines lol 😂😂💓🚽This beat the dust for sure . Made my day
Brilliant! This has got to find a place on the winner's list!
"The never quitter shitter" 😂 It's dirty job but someone's got to do it. Great Ode!
Love it❤️❤️👍
This is AWESOME! I’m in love with it! I’m going to share it with some of my readers. It’s a good laugh! Well done. Thank you! 😂😂😂
Hahaha! This is so fun and clever. A great ode 😂👏🏼