Together, alone
one satoric palindrome poem
Deny it as much as you want___when I look away, there’s no more mooN
Indulge in the illusion of real________when I am the one, i am the herO
Sim within a sim within a sim_flat earthers, deep state, aliens, illuminatI
Too many truths, so many lies_________________is this the final tesT
React - don’t respond - reply, now replay_____i’m psychotic, it’s somatiC
Anxious? avoid asphyxiation____forgetting your breath leads to traumA
Cache food in and out of your system___emotional eating away summeR
Time flies on a dull day___can you elude quaintness if you are the quainT
I kill myself every meal, every day_you can't kill time with trivial hobbieS
One inspiration, 1 expiration__________here and now alone, you and I
Nevermind we're losing our selves____not all that’s lost should be founD
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I hope you enjoyed my palindrome acrostic. It was inspired by a Rotas-Sator magic square and can be read both top to bottom on the left and bottom to top on the right. Also, you can read it as one poem or as two different ones, by isolating the left or the right half, top down or bottom up! Have fun and let me know your thoughts down in the comment.
About the Creator
Edoardo Segato-Figueroa
Storyteller, Singer-songwriter. Husband and dog dad.
Author of "Countercurrent", Italian biography of Nikola Tesla.
Sci-fi and Cli-fi novellas. Sciencey essays.
Co-founder of NYADO and producer of Mission to Earth music-film.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Masterful proofreading
Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
Comments (4)
I love the craftsmanship and exploring creativity here, and the result is very effective. This is great! : )
I love the Palindrome-Acrostic. Well done!
Amazing!! Skillfully executed. I am hearing psychedelic music in my mind as I read. I love how the first line takes on deeper meaning when I return to it after a bottoms up reading!
Extremely clever & well crafted.