To Love Or Not To Love
Nah, That's Not Really A Question. Who You Love, Though, Matters A Great Deal
To talk of love
is hard to do.
The ins and outs
that get you thru.
But when it dies,
as it will do.
Then the talk of love
won't work for you.
From you it's cold
and dead and old.
Not at all the love
you have been told of.
It's dark and mean
and may be bad.
You can't tell
of what
you have not had.
You may have had it once,
but now it is gone.
You had to grow up fast,
you got hard and torn.
You want to know if
it has a shot.
To give you what
they say they got.
If not, I know,
you will be ok.
You have come
this far and you
are ok.
So, the tale I tell,
of this orb they call love.
Is that love for your
self is just enuf.
I love me,
a bit more
with each new day.
And if you know me,
at all....
then, that is all I need say!
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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
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Comments (3)
Lol, for me, all love ever does is break and burn and end. Loved your poem!
My wife always likes to point out that when Jesus tells us that the two great commandments are to love God with all you've got & to love your neighbor as yourself, "yourself" is included.
Way to go for it is important to love oneself.