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To be immortal or not

one life of suffering or an eternity

By HufflecupPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
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what would happen if no one died

no tears to shed in grief

no apologies left unspoken

friendships may sour

hatred may soften

you never have to say goodbye

suffering may become monotonous

happiness may taste bitter

born with a fear of permanence

a duty to endure eternity

a heart that is destined to break

with no promise of relief

only a promise to remember the pain

two choices left

melancholy or cruelty

why would anyone choose immortality

it prolongs all the worst parts

while the good fades in to obscurity

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About the Creator

Hufflecup

I want nothing more than to dedicate my life to writing, so I figured I would start here to test the waters. I will be submitting stories to as many communities as possible.

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  • ROCK 5 months ago

    Exceptional example of our inner adversity; brilliant!

  • I definitely wouldn't wanna be an immortal. Life sucks, lol. Loved your poem!

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