Thinking about you...
I'm gripping the recollections of a Love that use to be mine...
I know you pondering
About me...
In the Phantoms of the Twilight.
My heart can't decline,
The spectacle that seems to be Right!
My Nostrils, still hold onto the redolence of your skin...
I can't sleep at night when you're always on my mind.
My pillow forbids my head, so I stay up and Daydream of you instead...
Yet, why can't I let it go if it's not functioning for us...
Like icicles we melted, comparative to warm spring.
With-it, I held on to the memories of you and me.
Last night, I dreamt the most beautiful dream...
of a premature Romantic reunion of you and me.
Reality steering me away from the illusion,
I thirst to find a solution...
Did you really love me? Or was it solely my Delusion?
Ps. My emotions & me
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Comments (21)
Real, raw and incredibly beautiful! What an amazing poet you are!
Beautiful work, Lonzo! I always look forward to reading your pieces! You have such a wonderful command of language and expressing even the deepest emotions! Bravo!
another beautiful piece - well done!
So wonderful, Lonzo! ππ
Truly beautiful.
Excellent ππ₯°
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that last line, kinda get's you where you feel. You captured a place we've all been brother. Beautifully done.
Beautiful piece, as always.
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Aw, simply amazing π So many gorgeous lines in here!
Very very deep!
very classic:)
We do tend to hold onto memories once sweet & wonder how we could ever have lost or let them go. I find myself drifting back over forty years with such questions & an empty feeling deep inside. One editorial note: In the line, "I can't sleep at night when your always on my mind," it should be the contraction "you're".
This was very relatable and beautifully written!
Love will drive you crazy like that. Well done, sir ππ
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You are amazing my friend. How do you keep conveying these complex feelings so eloquently? If you ever decide to write a long-form poem or a novel can I humbly submit this for a potential title? 'In the Phantoms of the Twilight.' -Shivers All Over-