All the days, we became exactly, who we wanted to be
Butterfly kisses, bird songs, lightning bug lights
Clouds floating, in shapes, above our heads
Destinations unknown, journeys waiting, paths calling
Every one of our dreams, shining in the light, of a buttery yellow sun
Flights across blue skies, trips on winding roads, cruises over open waters
Gifts we gave every time, we felt the air buzz, with electric feelings
Hillside retreats, vacation rentals, beachside hotels
Intimate touches of our skin, mixing with the taste, of salt on our lips
Jumping through hoops, taking leaps of faith, soaring above the fray
Kindness in every corner, of the way our eyes look, back at each other
Love lasting forever, hope springing eternal, happiness being contagious
My everything spun around, your everything, spun around me
Ocean breezes, pina coladas, tropical islands
Naked moments, where we showed, everything
People we love, Times we cherish, Holidays we gather
Quiet spaces, where we said a million things, without saying a word
Reaching out, holding on, staying close
Sacrifices we made, when all we had, was each other
Todays we live for, yesterdays we cherish, tomorrows we believe in
U stealing glances at me, me stealing glances at you, us stealing us
Vacations in the sun, weekends in the city, getaways in the country
Watching moonlight, with our heads touching, under a blanket of stars
Xanadus, nobody dared to go to, beautiful horizons, scenic overlooks
Yin with Yang, the Tiger dancing with the Dragon, Heaven with Earth
Zen moments, where we didn't find questions, and lost the answers
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Beautiful absolutely beautiful!!!💕❤️❤️
This was a great read, and you handled the letter constraints so well that parts just flowed together at times. “ Todays we live for, yesterdays we cherish, tomorrows we believe in” is my favourite line, and I liked the rhythm of the lines, as well as the way this relationship is portrayed ❤️ Well done!
I just love the abecedarians when I don't realize what it is until towards the end! Great job! Thank you!😊💕❤️
This is gorgeous! I loved all the descriptions and how you wove it together.
So many lines to love, but the feeling it sparked was magical
How beautiful! So gorgeously constructed, the hop ein this line really got my heart strings, just lovely, 'Todays we live for, yesterdays we cherish, tomorrows we believe in'
Enjoyed this one very much!
This was so very lovely :) What a beautiful, heartfelt piece.
The last line summed it up completely. I see me in between every line here. So well said and still speaking after it is all said and done. Poetic and prophetic.
"Zen moments, when we didn't find questions and lost the answers." A beautiful poem of love
love
This is absolutely beautiful. Well done.
Thank you for this little piece of loveliness with all of its positive imagery. I needed this today. It was like a cold compress to the head.
This love (relationship that is being describe ) seems so magical. Love how you describe the activities y'all did together. Wonderful poem🥺♥️
"My everything spun around, your everything, spun around me" - my favourite bit!
What a wonderful Abecedarian poem! “ Todays we live for, yesterdays we cherish, tomorrows we believe in”…profound words.
This is some outstanding writing - I can't even begin to point out the parts I liked, there are just so many!
All these moments are apart from the everyday, a homage to the elevation of time together I feel.
Us stealing us. I especially loved that part the most! This was such a wonderful poem!
I particularly enjoyed you adding Ying and Yang and Chinese mythology. What an unexpected ending
👍Nice work Will. This made me feel all warm and gooey inside lol! ☺️😆 I used Xanadu for x as well. I like that word now.
This was a wonderful abecerdian! These were definitely a lot of things that I also love! This was so creative and wonderful! Great work Will!!
Sounds good to me, Invisi. You have indeed listed many of the things I love.
Great free verse.