Touch – touch what?
The table, the folding table?
The sheet
The towels
The over whelming anxiety.
I can See –
The never ending piles of
Dirty, yet to clean pile of laundry.
Piles of clean, yet to fold linens.
The spinning linens
Timers faster than I can moves
(distracted)—
Hear –
Nothing, but whirring and tumbling.
Inner thoughts, not so muffled.
My music, mostly, just some emotional rock.
Beeping, signaling completing, of cycles
Taste – Cold water?
Smell – the
Cleaner
Dirty linens
(smokey, perfumy)
Clean
(detergent)
Hopefully, not smoke from lint
Or my burn out.
About the Creator
R.R.Hannaman
I have been writing a lot of stories and poems for a long time. It is nice to have a place to share it. I like to write about varying topics in my poem. I am constantly working on my world building and stories about my world Avaboya.
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