There was a lot to say
There was a ton to say.
There was a lot to express and cherish that day.
The way was to go, in the event that you had come two days sooner.
Today in the sea stream
I'm going far away.
The leaves are lost as they float in the obscurity.
Gahan called me around evening time, and you came today.
On the off chance that you cry, unfortunately, my goodbye is at night.
Assuming that you come, O visitor
It was a dry season.
Futat Champa, that day, assuming Chaitali Moon grinned.
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The repetition of "There was a lot to say" emphasizes the weight of unspoken words and unexpressed emotions, the imagery of floating leaves in obscurity beautifully conveys a feeling of uncertainty and transience, the line about saying goodbye at night and the potential for tears evokes a touch of sadness, we‘re deeply moved by the poem, loved it, and hope to read more of your work, thank you very much again for sharing this spiritual journey that touched our hearts Rony, subscribed.
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