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There’s no place like home

"Kia mau ki te tokanga nui a noho"

By Joe O’ConnorPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
Runner-Up in Abecedarian Challenge
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There’s no place like home
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Aotearoa’s

Beckoning

Call

Devotedly

Echoes in the mind of her people.

Flights

Going

Homebound

Ignored

Journeying where the grass is greener.

Kiwis

Look

Mondially

Neglecting

Our pounamu resting against our chests.

Pride

Quietly

Ruminates

Since

Te reo Māori reminds us, kia mau ki te tokanga nui a noho.

Unconditionally, her

Voice

Whispers

Xenially,

You’re welcome here. You’re welcome home.

Zealandia.



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About the Creator

Joe O’Connor

New Zealander living in London

Teacher of English and History, and sport-lover

Mostly short stories and poems📚

Feel free to be honest- one constructive comment beats a hundred generic ones

Currently writing James The Wonderer

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  • Lacy Loar-Gruenler3 months ago

    Joe, this is so beautiful. One of my professors married a Māori man she met while vacationing in New Zealand. They moved to Cambridge and have been there more than 40 years. I always wondered how he acclimated and if he missed visiting his home. Your poem is such a strong statement for 'home'. And congrats on the Abecedarian challenge! A wonderful entry!

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your win!! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • D.K. Shepard3 months ago

    Congrats! What an intriguing and clever piece!

  • Liam Storm3 months ago

    Congrats on your placement! Great poem

  • Windchime3 months ago

    Love this one too...

  • Denise E Lindquist3 months ago

    I enjoy the abecedarian's that I don't know that is one until I get further into it! Good job!😊💕

  • Patrick M. Ohana3 months ago

    I lived in Hawai'i for seven years, getting to know the brethren of the proud Māori. I love all Polynesians : )

  • Jazzy 3 months ago

    I didn't even notice this was for the challenge so well done

  • L.C. Schäfer4 months ago

    What a gorgeous tribute, and more New words for me to learn ❤️

  • Anna 4 months ago

    Love this abecedarian!

  • Toby Heward4 months ago

    Beautifully done

  • Rachel Deeming4 months ago

    A lovely dedication to your homeland. I have visited her too. Beautiful. I have some very special memories from there.

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