the webs you spin
are strung of soft lips
and gentle fingers.
the threads you tie
are gold
that make my eyes shine.
the strings you weave
are words
i never want to stop hearing.
you’re mine/don’t leave me/wait, I love you.
my arms are tied
to your truth
that is a lie.
my heart is bound
to your
empty chest.
my tears are stuck
in my throat
because i don’t want to cry.
i’m yours/i won’t leave you/i can’t say it back.
wool over my eyelids,
stuffed in my ears
like cotton balls,
your fingers weave
a web
in the shape of me.
About the Creator
Sara
Don’t look for love.
Be love.
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I Am Grateful For So Many Things
I am grateful that I had the opportunity to experience _________. Rupi Kaur's Gratitude Writing Prompts I am grateful that I had the opportunity to experience my children growing up to be kind and loving human beings, that are raising families and work in areas that are making a difference.
By Denise E Lindquist2 days ago in Writers
Comments (6)
Congratulations on winning Poppy”s March Prompts… this is very cleverly written heartache.
Really excellent! Very well crafted piece featuring such strong web imagery!
-My heart is bound to your empty chest- 😮🤩 I see why this won the challenge. Great work, Sara.
Oh. My. Gosh. This is incredible. Utterly enthralling start to finish. Literally every single line of this is a masterpiece.
Wow, the imagery and impact behind this poem. I was absolutely mesmerized while reading. Well done!
"My arms are tied to your truth that is a lie". Loved that line the most!