To me it's
fudge bar
gum drop
fizz stick
ice pop.
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To you it's
new ride
porch smoke
old film
bottle coke.
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To me it's
skin care
true crime
thrift store
show time.
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To you it's
clean sheets
iced cake
warm bath
home make.
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To us it's
fall hike
road trip
dog fun
kissed lip.
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To us it's
our house
this view
only me
only you.
About the Creator
Emma Kate Coleman
An overworked hard news journalist seeking creativity and community. Lover of dogs, antique stores and homemade bread. Thrift queen and photography peasant. Happy to be here. :)
"Write hard and clear about what hurts." - Ernest Hemingway
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Comments (6)
This was the most perfect love poem omg 🥹
This really felt like a love story all summed up perfectly 🥰🥰. I really liked how you pulled it together with the “us” parts!!
Awww, this was so sweet! I loved the rhyme of it! Very beautifully written!
I felt like I was dancing.
Excellent. You made every word count.
Oh, this is fab! Love the snappiness of each short line and how much meaning and imagery they conjure in the mind! Well done, Emma!