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The Watcher

A Poem

By Mother CombsPublished 10 days ago 1 min read
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He watches over his city

High above on the rooftops

Protecting it from the supernatural

Watching out for dark witchcraft

He sits on his ledge

Never once seeming to move

Guarding against evil voodoo

All under the unanimous disguise

Of an inanimate creature made of stone

Never once get appreciation

Never once being honored

For heroic deeds he does

For the protection he gives to the city

surreal poetryFree VerseFor Funfact or fiction
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About the Creator

Mother Combs

Come near, sit a spell, and listen to tales of old as I sit and rock by my fire. I'll serve you some cocoa and cookies as I tell you of the time long gone by when your Greats-greats once lived.

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Mike Judey Dharr

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    Creative use of language & vocab

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  • Donna Fox (HKB)about an hour ago

    I love the moodiness of this poem, it felt like an opening set of lines before an epic tale!

  • Hannah Moore10 days ago

    That's how you end up with a heart of stone.

  • Awww, I feel so sad for him. I wanna give him a hug and say thank you 🥺❤️

  • Kenny Penn10 days ago

    Reminds me of a cartoon I watched when I was a kid. I think it was called Gargoyles. Great piece, M.C.

  • Dana Crandell10 days ago

    This invokes empathy for the gargoyle very nicely. Well done, Sharon!

  • Paul Stewart10 days ago

    Love the image and your compelling and intriguing words. Feels like something old-world! Well done, Sharon!

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