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Tiny tender turtles
Traveling through the terrain
To Thalassa.
Terrible tormentors!
Troublesome!
Threatening!
Terrifying!
Testudines tenaciously trying to thrive
Trying...
Trying...
Trying...
TRIUMPH!
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Audrey Heitz
Wife, mother, animal lover, retired elementary school teacher and gardener.
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Comments (3)
Aw, this is so sweet! This painted the perfect picture of those adorable things making the long journey to the ocean for the very first time, and the victory at the end - love it! 🥹❤️
Very well done!
This poem has so much movement! It feels wonderful to read, and flows so nicely.