The Sweet Smells Of A New Baby Girl
Such cute faces and so much enjoyment coming soon and her hair will curl
Baby girl due June twentieth.
So precious, so sweet, such a treat!
The little one moved down on the twenty-eighth.
She may be sooner for a meet and greet.
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So precious, so sweet, such a treat,
baby smells are the best! Most smells, have faith.
She may be sooner for a meet and greet
The baby may be born early by one month!
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Baby smells are best, most smells, have faith!
Her Daddy is anxiously awaiting the meet.
The baby may be born early by one month.
Alaska is her name, you know she is so sweet!
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Her Daddy is anxiously awaiting the meet!
An early date sounds great, like May eighteenth
Alaska is her name, you know she is so sweet!
Is the baby girl due June twentieth?
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Denise E Lindquist
I am married with 7 children, 27 grands, and 12 great-grandchildren. I am a culture consultant part-time. I write A Poem a Day in February for 8 years now. I wrote 4 - 50,000 word stories in NaNoWriMo. I write on Vocal/Medium weekly.
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Author's Notes: I rediscovered my 1980's poetry magnets box and in it were two poems I find compelling. I recall having challenged myself to create two poems using the same set of words. These two poem are what spilled out. Which one resonates more with you, version A or B? Leave it in Comments. I'd love to know your thoughts!
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I fill you are talking about my girl
This is pure loveliness
The miracle of life, beautiful Denise 😊
Loving this!!! Well done, Denise!!!💖💖💕
Yes, babies have their special smell. Are you having a new grandchild? Alaska is a beautiful name ❤️
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