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The Story of My Life

Critiqued

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 3 years ago • 1 min read
The Story of My Life
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Critiquing my life

like a book on the shelf

Cutting through with a knife

exposing myself

Not a comfortable task

there are some chapters, I'd skip

I have been knocked on my ass

I have given some lip

But the gist of my story

not to make up excuses

Catalogued inventory

collected some bruises

Learned to laugh at myself

but stopped taking the shit

And then I gazed into hell

and said, "you can't make me quit"

I am tougher than you think

so, don't look so surprised

When I take what you dish,

lookin into your eyes

And then, made my come back

like Harrison Ford did, in Witness

Exposed all your crap

getting over the sickness

Settled into a rhythm

that suits who I am

to shine as bright as a prism

to my lyrical jam

humor

About the Creator

Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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    Written by Kelli Sheckler-Amsden