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somewhere out there, somewhen in time,
you and i did not stay the same.
we never fell to our knees.
we held each other fast.
our hearts stayed dust-free.
you ask me now,
"was it good?"
i smile.
"yes."
***
I feel I need to clarify the first line. When I count the syllables in my head, it has 8. But according to the syllable counter Vocal has said they will be using for this challenge, it has 9. Maybe I have a fundamental misunderstanding of how syllables work. Go figure.
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Alivia Varvel
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