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The Sky's Empty Promises

Open Hands and Reaching Arms

By Poppy Published 2 years ago Updated 7 months ago 1 min read
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The boy looks like tangled letters and overplayed songs. He laughs like happiness is real and the earth turns when he does, spinning around him.

The girl plucks petals and stands in a field of sunflowers, facing the sun and reaching towards it when they do. She is falling through the endless sky, pretending she can fly, because only she knows how close she is to kissing the ground.

That boy stands on a podium with a medal the colour of a king’s crown. He sings to a crowd of people, his voice like liquid lava melting more. The rounds of applause will always be for him – everything will be.

That girl is a patch of dreams and a piece of naivety, stitched together with hope. She finds herself in the dark worlds of his eyes, but he doesn’t look down long enough to notice.

The carefree boy chooses careless girls with pretty hair and fake smiles. He looks down at them like he could drown in them or drink the sky from their cupped hands.

The invisible girl has already drowned in his depths, already been drunk on the sky’s empty promises.

The boy is as untouchable as a falling star will ever get and the girl is climbing skyscrapers with open hands and reaching arms.

The boy is a wish and a dream and a whole galaxy and the girl loves him like one. But all she will ever get to hold in her hands is the pen she writes this with, and never him.

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  • Mackenzie Davis7 months ago

    "That girl is a patch of dreams and a piece of naivety, stitched together with hope. She finds herself in the dark worlds of his eyes, but he doesn’t look down long enough to notice." Damn, Poppy, this is a superb poem through and through. I particularly love this stanza for its metaphor, dreams and naivety stitched together with hope. A beautiful image, yet so sad. It encapsulates the entire poem so well, but I need the rest of it to fully see. The dangers of the earth loving the sky...only the pen shall make the twain meet, and even then... A truly tragic piece, and I applaud your precision in showing us that. A little note: your suggestion at the end of the poem is absent! I'd like to read more like it. ;D

  • Cendrine Marrouat9 months ago

    OMG, I can so relate to this poem! You did a masterful job!

  • Naomi Gold9 months ago

    Oh, but there’s so much power in that pen! Great prose poem about the ache of putting someone on a pedestal. I think we all learn from that the hard way, and this was palpable.

  • Hannah Moore9 months ago

    This put me in mind of the kind of boy-band crush of young girls but felt so much more dangerous.

  • As J. Michael Straczynski said, "All love is unrequited."

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