It was over from the start
Annoying as ever in your own way
Trying for the attention phase but still awkward
Even little fights might come out in the battle
Slowly you get under my skin
Turning face and changing minds
It only takes so much time
To look at you in a certain way
All those previous things have changed
I see your intentions as you pursue
Getting closer in the opposite direction
The look you give is pure intention
All I can do is act with perception
The closer you are the more interesting it becomes
To fall in love is such a strange devotion
Enamored in feeling and emotions
About the Creator
Sarah Danaher
I enjoy writing for fun. I like to write for several genres including fantasy, poetry, and dystopian, but I am open to trying other genres too. It has been a source of stress relief from my busy life.
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I have been taking some time away from writing. I haven't forgotten about Vocal, the truth is I just have been too busy pursuing other things to write online and honestly, my little family and I just had a really hard month between the flu and a weird eye infection/cold circulating our house. I'm currently sipping some warm peppermint tea because my throat is sore.
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This was so well done! You nailed it! It read very well from top to bottom and in reverse!
Excellent writing. You did a great job constructing this inverse poem so that it makes sense from start to finish or finish to start.