The Sand Beneath My Feet
A Walk Along the Beach
Smooth is the sand,
I feel beneath my feet,
Smooth are the sounds of summer,
That can't be beat,
Smooth are the waves,
Crashing against me,
Smooth are the winds,
That Blow through the air,
Hoping not to ruin my hair,
Looking out at the sun,
My fun has just begun,
My life lived walking a beach,
Always and never,
Can't be beat,
The sound of music swells nearby,
Causes me joy most high,
Smooth are the hands,
That gently hold mine,
Always and forever,
Until the end of time,
Smooth are the sunsets,
That make the sky pink,
As I sit here,
With an ice-cold drink,
Time and time again,
I wish days like this,
Would never end.
About the Creator
April Denise Stuart
I have been writing for awhile and love to share my writing with others. I enjoy writing about Virginia as well as miscellaneous topics.
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Comments (12)
loved it!!!
Outstanding! Keep striving for greatness—congratulations
Nice Poem🌊....Love it....
How sad that this must just be a daydream today.
That’s really beautiful you’ve done a great job depicting smooth in this poem.
Beautifully written about one of my favourite places.
I also love the beach, so this poem truly resonated with me.
Great entry. I love the beach too! 🌊😊
Beautiful poem. Congrats on the TS
Wow! Incredible piece. Congratulations!! 🩵👏🏼
Beautiful nature poem!!! Love it!!!💕❤️❤️
Your imageries were so vivid! I felt as if I was there! Loved your poem!