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The River

Let Go

By Cathy holmesPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
Photo by Jamie Fenn on Unsplash

Don't waste precious time,

clinging to a rocky path.

Else, life may drown you.

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Cathy holmes

Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.

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Comments (12)

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a month ago

    Great Cathy! Great.

  • Lovely words

  • Facts 💯😉🙏❤️

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    Nice , totally agree👌🥰

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  • Why do I feel attacked? Lol. So much truth to this! I loved it!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    You nailed it!!!💕💖😊

  • Moe Radosevichabout a year ago

    very nice 😀

  • Thavien Yliasterabout a year ago

    Dang Cathy, this poem is so garsh darn right that there's nothing gosh darn wrong with it. You're just spitting straight facts.

  • Emily Marie Concannonabout a year ago

    So true 💚

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a year ago


  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Beautiful words that sadly hold a little too much truth. Loved this.

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