The Queen of Heart
She’s quite a tart
Unusually sharp
And ready to harp
She’s awfully snotty
And never naughty
As she judges you
But I’ll give you a clue
Late at night
When she’s out of sight
She lies in bed
Covering her head
Crying huge tears
For many wasted years
That she was made of ice
Instead of being nice
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Comments (7)
Oh I feel so sad for her 🥺 I often cry too but wishing I was cold hearted towards some people instead of being nice. Maybe the Queen of Hearts and I can learn from each other. Loved your poem!
Ha! This is great!
The agony of past regrets.
Great job. What a hoot, I just finished a “alice” poem.
That was great fun, I must learn to write poetry one day (that is a joke LOL) , back to bed now
Nice rhyme scheme MC! We all knew somewhere deep the Queen had a soft side. 🖤
Playing with the queen of hearts is either all good or all bad. 🌹♥️