the playground
a stream of consciousness
We could spend a thousand lifetimes
In this mine
Designed by the minds
Of gods and men
Man made hell
God made heaven
Limbo between
Dip in
Dip out
Go deep
into sleep
Lucid dreams.
Wake up.
Not for long
Not too far
Balance is the place
Without a bar.
.
Wisdom imparts
From deep in your heart
Desensitised?
Re-sensitise!
Take off your disguise
For how much of this world
is founded on lies
Breaking trust
Hearts rust
Human bots decay
As AI allays
.
Reassure me
Rise
Look into my eyes
Tell me once more
That I am your prize
Together is all
I want from this mine
I’ve been to the silt
of worlds unkind
Tell me once more
From your embrace
Tell me once more
As you caress my face.
.
Tell me about this world
of my creation
That I can do anything
Through the power of vibration.
Tell me again as I fall to sleep
That you’ll never give me
reasons to weep
Tell me again never to run
Tell me once more
The best is yet to come
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Random rhymes and ramblings!
I had no idea what to name this or what photo to choose.
I settled on this one after not too much thought because my opening is essentially describing the playground of earth and the game of truth and deception that we are all actors in…
questioning the nature of reality…
whilst underneath all of it, stripped bare, we are desperately seeking reassurance and connection.
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Comments (5)
Breaking trust. Hearts rust. That was soooo true and deep. Also, I don't think this was ramblings. It was a masterpiece!
This is fabulous. Well done.
Great work! I couldn’t stop reading!
Goodness, Kayleigh! Can you stop being so brilliant! lol! Seriously, joking aside, I love where you took this ramblings! Deep stuff!
Powerful